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Sunday, December 19, 2010

What punctuation do I use with like, such as, and including?

None. How's that for an answer! I'm not quite sure why people feel the need to add a comma, semicolon, or colon around these words. I suppose when we make statements like "He had many bright ideas such as self-cleaning carpet and solar-powered snow melting devices," we do tend to pause a little before or after the "such as" as if waiting for a drum roll. Here are examples of INCORRECT punctuation with like, such as, and including:

X He had many bright ideas such as: self cleaning carpet and solar-powered snow melting devices.
X I bought a ton of groceries; including pet supplies, toiletries, the entire produce section, and yogurt.
X Certain behaviors do not belong in public, like picking at scabs and cleaning fingernails.

With the first example you might be thinking of the use of a colon if the list is introduced by a complete sentence: "He came up with two of the most innovative ideas ever: self cleaning carpet and solar-powered snow melting devices." In that case you can read the sentence before the colon and it makes sense: "He came up with two of the most innovative ideas ever." But if you read the "sentence" before the colon with the such as, it would not make sense: "He had many bright ideas such as." Kind of leaves you hanging doesn't it?

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